Poem

Although a long drive, I honestly don't mind.
I usually play on my phone, then sleep like a stone.
I was awoken by a loud PLOP! Then I started to feel my ears pop.
We arrived at our home for the week, at the top of the peak.
I did not lollygag, as I unpacked my bag.
I went to the see the breathtaking view, all I could see was green and blue.
The hikes were very long, but we had to remain strong.
Seeing the amazing waterfalls, so peaceful and tall.
The beautiful trees and flowers, so much different from ours.
I do not know whats better than a trip to the mountains.

I used Onomatopoeia, simile, and Internal rhyme.

Comments

  1. JC's BlogMarch 13, 2018 at 1:49 PM

    This is a great poem about a trip to the mountains. I felt like I was on the trip while reading your poem.

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  2. BronwynMarch 15, 2018 at 9:39 AM

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. The rhyme gives the poem a little pizzazz!

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